Welcome to the February edition of Fiction in 50, where young and old, novice and master, serious and slightly silly, gather to share their golden nuggets of micro-narrative. If you’d like to join in, simply create a piece of fiction or poetry in 50 words or less using this month’s prompt and post a link to your work of genius in the comments of this post. If you want to share on twitter, don’t forget to use the hashtag #Fi50. To find out more about the challenge and future prompts, simply click on the large attractive button at the beginning of this post. This month’s prompt is…
And I have titled my contribution:
Shuffling Off This Mundane Coil
Shaz,
I can’t go on. Don’t try to stop me. I’m going to a better place.
Jodz.
Dear Jodie,
I have received your resignation and we at Kwiki-shop Groceries wish you the best in pursuing an acting career. We will all say we knew you before you were famous!
Sharon
(Manager)
Keen-eyed readers will note that this is actually 51 words (again!). The last time I asked for editing suggestions I received a slew of excellent thoughts, so feel free to pitch in and let me know where I could lose a word or two and get under the required 50 words.
Next month’s prompt will be…
Looking forward to seeing everyone’s contributions this month (especially any newbies!)
Until next time,
Bruce
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You could just change “have received” to “accept”
I had a similar problem but solved it much the same way!
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In response to your request for a refund for faulty goods, the answer is no.
The 5-pt text at the end of your guarantee tells you that. Do you seriously think anything that cheap would last as long as a year?
Got you, sucker!
Have a nice day.
Sincerely Yours….
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See? Who needs self-editing when there are good people to do it for me!
Excellent work this month, Pett. Keep this up and we’ll be talking about a promotion within the month.
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Could have put “I have” to a contraction.
Nice one!
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Here is mine: http://writing-out-of-the-blue.blogspot.com/2015/02/sincerely-yours50-words-challenge-fi50.html
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Excellent!
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I would have dropped Groceries. Kwiki-shop is enough.
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Another good (and in hindsight, obvious) suggestion. Thanks 🙂
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Using 51 words marks you as a rebel, like some leather jacket wearing kid from the 50’s. Carry on showing you aren’t ‘a part of the system’.
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I will. ESPECIALLY when it’s my system that I’m bucking. Ultimate rebel, me.
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I think that I will never see a wasp as lovely as a bee!
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Sincerely, it’s true!
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The saga continues. Here is my entry for this month’s topic: http://wp.me/p24idL-2QP.
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Sweet!
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